Months later he finds out who she is.
The revelations drive him crazy as he screams and throws around glass candlesticks.
He recalls her husband, a noble he had knocked off and replaced. She was his wife who had evaded his soldiers for years.
Vengeance is a bitch.
Note: This was the first ever series i started writing and managed to end. I hope the end was not disappointing. I think I like this style of writing, giving out short chapters and no names. What do you say?
The revelations drive him crazy as he screams and throws around glass candlesticks.
He recalls her husband, a noble he had knocked off and replaced. She was his wife who had evaded his soldiers for years.
Vengeance is a bitch.
Note: This was the first ever series i started writing and managed to end. I hope the end was not disappointing. I think I like this style of writing, giving out short chapters and no names. What do you say?
6 comments:
Wow. All I thought was the girl was a bitch :-) Superb ending Ayu. I loved it. man, teach me how to write stuff like this. :)
The end was justified! The whole series was fantastic..Ah! I wish I were able to convey so much in so less :)
TC
hey...
nice....all the build up, now it seems like the story was always there...
as in u had the whole story n were jus givin gout portions of it...
beautifully connected...
:)
@ Ananya
Haha I knew you would be in for a surprise. Thanks a lot. And you are already better than me :)
@ Fatima
Hey thanks a lot :D Im glad it didnt turn out to be a mess.
@ Eon
Hey
Yeah, well, I got the idea of the story while writing the second chapter. Im glad you liked it. Thanks a lot. :D
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